Would've been good to capture links here to *both* methods of reporting, and ground the observations generally with reference to scholarship/academic commentary. At the moment, it's just one example of "a thing I noticed"...

This could usefully have been related to the observations above regardnig Mulvey, male gaze, etc. Also, it merits some critique, as do the other terms--the page so far is very clearly written from one perspective only.

Sure. But--again--how does this relate to the other concepts identified thus far? Mediation (the news story), objectification, male gaze, etc. etc. all contribute to the perpetuation of ideologies, and at the same time are products of ideological contexts... Needs more thoughtful unpacking.

Need some references here. Also, the author doesn't really identify what hegemony is; she just gives an example of something that, at one time, was hegemonic.

What is gynocritics...? Explain.

Also, explain a little more what her contribution is to the field.

This section and the next are symptoms of a disjointed structure to the story. It's just some stuff the author wants to demonstrate she knows--none of this ties in together.