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Bobby Choi

Stop Using Chimps as Guinea Pigs - NYTimes.com - 0 views

  • Ending chimpanzee research and retiring the animals to sanctuaries would save taxpayers about $30 million a year.
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      A good balance between logos and pathos in the writing.
  • But in the years since, our understanding of its effect on primates, as well as alternatives to it, have made great strides, to the point where I no longer believe such experiments make sense — scientifically, financially or ethically.
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      Thesis Statement
  • BEFORE I was elected to Congress, I was a physiologist at the Navy’s School of Aviation Medicine.
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      Exordium, Massive Ethos
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  • At the time, I believed such research was worth the pain inflicted on the animals.
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      Minor Confutatio
Bobby Choi

Marriage -- It Really Is A Beautiful Thing | FoxNews.com - 0 views

  • Far from the miserable, broke, sexless life that it’s made out to be, the life of today’s married man is more fulfilling than any lonely, self-pleasing, single guy could hope for.
  • This myth, is not even in the vicinity of being true. The fact is that not only is divorce much lower than commonly stated, but the divorce rate is consistently declining because people of all ages inherently understand it’s value.
  • The truth is that married people live longer, happier, wealthier and more fulfilling lives by nearly every measurable barometer.
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  • Sorry Alfie, looks like Ward Cleaver has you beat.
  • Yes folks, there is one place where well over half of all marriages end in failure, one place where marriage results in dishonesty, stress, misery and a markedly decreased libido. That place is Hollywood. The next time a miserable, married couple shows on the silver screen or your plasma, try remembering that.
  • Also – and many of you will really hate to hear this – if both partners are actively practicing a religious faith, their divorce rate is even lower.
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    This article has some risque elements. If you're offended by this sort of thing, don't read it. I'm including it as an example of different tone / diction.
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