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    #1 alexhu465 pds on 06 May 11
     
    Although there are many great inventions today, computers are leading the race of the best. I am going to tell you why the computer is the best invention ever. The computer has multiple spectacular and interesting things about it. Some amazing things are the communication, advantages, and it's wonderful ability of helping the world today. A computer is like a new best friend because the computer helps you in more ways then you can ever imagine. Many valid websites on the Internet also have similar thoughts that agree with me. Because of the mystery of who really invented the computer, no one knows exactly who to give credit to because many people have helped make it greater by the years. I personally think credit is given to the person who started it first. Now, let me talk to you about the ability of helping the world today.
    The computer's ability of helping the world has been so helpful because of how many things the computer can help create. "Almost anything you know is run or made by computers. Cars and jets were designed on computers, traffic signals are run by computers and space exploration was started with computers." http://www.tatooine.fortunecity.com (page 1). The computer is like an extremely smart person because it can do almost anything. Look at a world without computers. People in the medical field wouldn't have cures to sicknesses because most cures were located with computers. http://www.tatooine.fortunecity.com (page1). My next thing I am going to talk about is the supreme ability of communication. And remember, if computers don't help us in everyday life, then what does?
    Now, the supreme communication on the computer is phenomenal. First of all, the communication on the computer is free like on your e-mail that you can access on your computer. Also, you can communicate all around the world with relatives, workers, and anyone you really want to. "Today most computers are capable (through either a phone line or a cable connection) of exchanging information over the Internet. Your child can send a message from his or her computer to the computer of a neighbor or a friend on the other side of the planet. Students might use computers to communicate with their classmates about homework assignments, group projects, or other school-related activities. http://www.sandiego.gov (page 1). They may also use them to submit homework assignments and presentations to their teachers" (page 1). In my opinion, computers can't get much simpler than how they are today. One of the most important features of the computer is making it easier for people to communicate with one another using computers. The most popular way of communication on the computer with Internet is electronic mail (e-mail)." http://www.rsna.org (page1).
    Lastly, I am going to tell you about the advantages the computer has within it that helps it be a better invention. It has helped students and teachers in many helpful ways for school purposes. With a computer's fast advancing tools, it is viewed as more of a requirement than a luxury in schools these days. Electronic programs are used daily to help students in many ways. http://www.drivenmad.biz (page 1). "Computers help students in any way they need, researching, typing, searching, etc... Teachers use computers as well. They use computers to keep track of grades, type out instruction for their students, and to let students use the computer for school purposes." http://www.tatooine.fortunecity.com (page 1). Advantages for the computer has affected the popularity of it in hundreds of ways like the speed of it, the portability of it, the slimness of it, and ect. Also, the computer probably wouldn't be as spectacular as it is already if it didn't have these small things that turned out to be a lot of outstanding advantages. Think about what would change to the computer's popularity if it didn't have any of these great advantages.
    As I conclude, I will tell you just a little more about what the computer helps us do. The computer can do so much like the communication around the world, the advantages it has, and the way it helps us, which I have already talked about. In my opinion, the computer is the best invention ever and if the computer isn't the best invention, then what is? Also, I think a computer is like a robot because a robot can do pretty much anything you want it to just like a computer can do; I am even doing my project on a computer. Imagine the world without computers in our everyday life. When I think of it, I think of it being all jumbled up, spending way to much time on easy jobs, and we would be probably be in need of medicine because computers help locate the cures to sicknesses and diseases. All I know is that computers are the best invention ever in so many ways. Before I go, I would like you to find out what a better invention would be than a computer, if you can.

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