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Both of our screens red as a cherry. With blood all around them. We got to Level 36, And it got so gruesome , Our guys had bright red blood everywhere, As we ran across the map like 2 hungry dogs were chasing us. But we won :]
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Steve Fulton on 11 Jan 12Number 2: I tried to use descriptive words.. Like I said "oUR SCREENS WERE AS RED AS A CHERRY" And "We were running like 2 dogs were chasing us. I compared things too
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The time I remember is when we thought we were the best, quickest, Most Unhurtable Super Hero's ever! I was Superman and he was Flash. So the journey began, We were riding bike's down a hilly, rocky, trashy hill full of imaginary signs saying “Death Here”. I was the lucky one, I made it out . . Alive. My cousin, Not so lucky. He fell scraped his head and landed on a Ginormous rock. Oh Yes, There's more stitches.
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Number 1: I tried to use voice... To make my reader feel like they were actually there
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Number 4: I think this part is my favorite because my childhood was great. And I love talking about it. I smile every time I think of things we did
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One of the best times was when Jaylon and I played Modern Warfare 3, And survived to Level 37 on Survival Mode. It had to be four hours we played that game. Over, Over, Unending. We had our mind set to beat Level 36, We were determined. Till 5' O Clock in the morning rolled around It was over, Finished. We had finally met our goal.
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Number 3: I revised this part so many times.. I tried to find the write thing to say, At the right part. I finally felt like it was in place and it was good.
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