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I really enjoy the graphics that you add.

hey, this is what writers do...

I prefer 'who' for people

'too' when you mean too much

ashamed... don't forget, blogger has the spellcheck button you can hit before you post.

I think you've identified one of her very rare qualities. There aren't too many people I could say this about but I know exactly what you mean. I think it's good that you have this kind of relationship. I think it also is evidence of your own maturity.

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I agree. Maybe we should have made more out of this as a school... Maybe it's not too late. I don't know that it would make a big difference to James Cameron but it would send the message to current students that literally anything is achievable.

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I like how you use sound to create atmosphere.

, you fool (direct address)

idiom = lead

Without realizing it, you are doing something very good. Writing about your writer's block even can be a great way to break through whatever it is that's blocking you. Often by writing about how you are having a hard time writing can get you into the rhythm of writing and then the words just keep coming. You could explore your writer's block even. It could be just a simple function of being distracted by some of the people around you. If they are writing and you feel as though it is coming easier for them then that could be intimidating. I think you should write about it.

This is also quite healthy. If you are strong at creating characters then your characters will often take on a life of their own. Many times they will demand their own freedom and hijack your storyline. Many accomplished writers admit to not knowing how their own stories will end while they are still writing them.

I've clued in to the common theme between both your journal entries. For your radio play, what about writing about a student who has to get an assignment done but she's experiencing writer's block? She might have a friend who is trying to help her, but classmates, a teacher and a parent who are all getting on her case... What happens if she doesn't get the piece finished?

Without realizing it, you are doing something very good. Writing about your writer's block even can be a great way to break through whatever it is that's blocking you. Often by writing about how you are having a hard time writing can get you into the rhythm of writing and then the words just keep coming. You could explore your writer's block even. It could be just a simple function of being distracted by some of the people around you. If they are writing and you feel as though it is coming easier for them then that could be intimidating. I think you should write about it.

Try to get in the habit of using capital 'I' all the time. I even take the extra time to do it in my texts so that I don't get into the habit of using lowercase 'I.'

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It's not nice to swear!