From Nancy Mitchell Author's Name: Ruth Creek Unit Title: Reading Step V Provide feedback to the author for each of the following unit components. Be comprehensive on your feedback/comments. "Good job! Well done" types of feedback/comments are NOT acceptable. Content: Content that supports organizational learning network environments. Areas: * Content is appropriate for the targeted audiences. Feedback Comments: I liked the flow of the unit, especially the use of Diigo sticky notes right in the readings! I was definitely with you on the content until the Youtube video about Cultural Awareness, but I guess the unit/class is more about reading and comprehension than following one topic to the end. ONLE Instructional Strategies: Integrate Constructivism instructional strategies and activities or other relevant strategies and activities to support the unit. ONLE Instructional Strategies Areas: * Integrate multiple ONLE instructional strategies in additional to constructivist instructional strategies. * Focus on "network" instructional strategies, not just "online (distributed)" instructional technologies. Feedback Comments: I saw learner-facilitator interaction, learner-interface interaction, and learner-learner interaction. I recognized the integration of participatory web as students will discuss through discussion boards online. ONLE Technologies: Web 2.0 tools, social media, and/or network media. Areas: * All ONLE technologies integrate effectively & appropriately? * Focus on "network" technologies, not just "online" technologies. Feedback Comments: The unit had Youtube videos and many online reading resources. I think there is an opportunity to develop a more student centered wiki to share and develop their ideas. Evaluations: Evaluate the goals and objectives of at least one lesson. Perform a pilot test on one lesson by asking a targeted audience of three and/or your classmates.

From Nancy Mitchell Author's Name: Veronica Ramos Unit Title: Technology and Recycling Provide feedback to the author for each of the following unit components. Be comprehensive on your feedback/comments. "Good job! Well done" types of feedback/comments are NOT acceptable. Content: Content that supports organizational learning network environments. Areas: * Content is appropriate for the targeted audiences. Feedback Comments: I am curious about the age group of the students working through this unit because one assignment talks about sending a request to the city of Avondale to help get the school recycling program underway, but they are only provided with a link for help, and no rubric or teacher feedback before submitting the email. ONLE Instructional Strategies: Integrate Constructivism instructional strategies and activities or other relevant strategies and activities to support the unit. ONLE Instructional Strategies Areas: * Integrate multiple ONLE instructional strategies in additional to constructivist instructional strategies. * Focus on "network" instructional strategies, not just "online (distributed)" instructional technologies. Feedback Comments: Students have the opportunity to use Dipity, Google docs, email, and Blogger to participate in the unit. This supports the integration of several instructional strategies including learner-learner interaction, learner-interface interaction, online group collaboration, reflection, and student publishing. Students are networking with the city and school community through this project. ONLE Technologies: Web 2.0 tools, social media, and/or network media. Areas: * All ONLE technologies integrate effectively & appropriately? * Focus on "network" technologies, not just "online" technologies. Feedback Comments: Students use Dipity to develop a timeline together, create and share a blog, and watch several videos to understand their tasks,

Evaluation 1: By Nancy Mitchell Author's Name: Erin Rain Unit Title: BCHS Geometry Environment Content: Content that supports organizational learning network environments. Areas: Content is appropriate for the targeted audiences. Feedback Comments: Really comprehensive content and directions, easy to read/follow. It's great to see math curriculum presented in this type of learning environment. This unit is a great way for teachers to become familiar and comfortable with a new way of teaching/learning so they can implement this type of learning into their curriculum. High schoolers are known to talk things out, so what a great tool for them to do so productively. ONLE Instructional Strategies: Integrate Constructivism instructional strategies and activities or other relevant strategies and activities to support the unit. ONLE Instructional Strategies Areas: Integrate multiple ONLE instructional strategies in additional to constructivist instructional strategies. Focus on "network" instructional strategies, not just "online (distributed)" instructional technologies. Feedback Comments: Students will be adding their input into the class wiki. Students will share resources using Delicious and maintain a personal learning environment with Google web 2.0 tools. Students teaching each other about content and sharing resources. Students will reflect on their content building unit. ONLE Technologies: Web 2.0 tools, social media, and/or network media. Areas: All ONLE technologies integrate effectively & appropriately? Focus on "network" technologies, not just "online" technologies. Feedback Comments: The tools are integrated in a way that makes sense for the students. Content is posted on the wiki, resources are shared in Delicious, students evaluate each other using Google docs and communicate through gmail. Evaluations: Evaluate the goals and objectives of at least one lesson. Perform a pilot test on