"de producción"

"ayudado"

"crear"

"de"

"como del"

"hecho"

"la necesidad de una reconversión"

choose another word...

"creativas"

"están muy preocupados por mejorar la situación"

"muchas ideas innovadoras"

"mejore"

link directo a la fuente

"del"

"se resuelva"

"la humanidad sobreviva"

"Tener"

Write a brief caption describing each image and what means.

"grave en la agricultura de España"

Now, you should describe the serious problem, because waht you explain is that many farmers helped to the system, but you don't say if this is the problem and why.

link directo a la fuente

"trabajaban en el"

"A partir del año"

"hubo"

"número"

"una gran"

"Estas"

"ayudado a"

"gran cantidad"

Write a caption/brief paragraph about the content on the video, specify what is the main idea inside, where something innovative is happening and how... Yo can quote some excerpt form the video as well.

"las grandes insdustrias"

"Uno de"

"que la agricultura de"

"tienen"

Esta situación ha aumentado el calentamiento global.

link directo a fuente

"la preocupación"

I cannot see the conection among animals, global warming and industry... it is not explained here and not an example is provided.

Is this a conclusion? If so, it should be another paragraph.

"la necesidad de productos agrícolas ambientalmente más amigables"

"gran aumento"

"número"

"crear una agricultura sostenible se"

"determinante"

"la necesidad de"

"ecológicos"

DELETE "de"

"de productos ecológicos"

"un crecimiento exponencial"

"Referencias"

"han dañado"

"La falta de agua es habitual"

Link directo a la fuente

Link a esa represa histórica, a Wikipedia en español, por ejemplo, o alguna página oficial en español sobre la presa.

"como"

"detienen el trasvase"

link directo a la fuente

"de las"

"a mantener"

"del río"

"el paisaje de"

"pueden"

"en torno a la"

link directo a la fuente

"estado financiero"

"afecta a"

"Sin embargo, esas mismas"

You need to add a caption here describing the picture, offering some info about what the image means.

You need to add a caption here describing the pictures, offering some info about what the images mean.

"quieren"

"otras"

"ciudadana"

"la historia moderna latinoamericana"

DELETE

"surge una cuestión obvia en muchos de sus países"

"la"

DELETE

"de la colonia"

"el nivel"

"las regiones"

"en"

"efecto negativo"

"pesado"

"la agricultura"

"están trabajando"

"innovadoras"

"Crean y usan"

DELETE

"El problema"

"la obesidad"

"el resultado"

"y por ello"

"suficientes"

"Esta cuestión"

DELETE

"se está"

"Por otro lado, existen procesos de sostenibilidad económica y medioambiental: los sistemas"

This is a way to connect with the previous paragraph, everything should flow...

"esta idea"

"ecológicos"

"porque resultan"

"calidad de agua" minúsculas

"Algunos artistas de origen hispano son populares en Estados Unidos, por ejemplo Enrique Iglesias (de España) y Don Omar (Puerto Rico)"

And then try to connect this better with the sentence I will recommend you to add before this one (see ahead on other note)

"artistas"

You shoudl add a couple of examples as well.

"se mezcla"

¿una cosa?!!!! Use other more appropriate word.

"La música"

"entre"

"Sucede lo mismo"

Add an example, otherwise this an empty statment.

What differences? You don't say what they are.

Those two last sentences should be the fist ones in the paragraph, since they introduce a general idea of cultural exchange, that you talk about when mentioning Iglesias y Omar.

DELETE this title, use directly the second one instead, and connect well this paragraph with the following one.

What type or style of US music impact on Latinamerican music? You should specify.

"el continente americano"

música en común, pero también creamos música muy diferente,

"han tenido"

", como las culturas de origen europeo, ibérico, amerindio, africano y mesztizo"

"años 70"

"dependiendo de"

"problemático"

"marca un límite en la riqueza"

Why is important?

"estás"

Confusing. Rewrite.

Yes, but Omar and Iglesias are both highly sexual in their videos and songs.

This is another argument, use another paragraph.

"Canciones: algunos ejemplos de influencia musical en los Estados Unidos"

There are hundreds of videos and songs by Celia Cruz in Youtube, and you both use the same one song!!! Plase, talk to each other and choose togetehr another song and video where you can give other extra information. You both are repeating some information, and that should not be.

"entre los tres"

"obvias"

"sus temas" Be specific about those topics when making this comparison, otherwise the reader is not getting anything form your analysis. The same with the following sentence about the "common message" from them to the young people. What is it?

¿Quién trae?  No entiendo...

"muestra a"

"en inglés"

"hablantes"

"un poco de español"

DELETE

"del baile"

"incorporan"

Be more specific and try to extract the idea here. What do you mean by "funny things"?

"trata sobre"

Confusing .Rephrase.

"a los"

¿Quiénes escuchan? Who?

"bailan"

You need a title here before the map.

"Este es"

"explicación"

"está muy cerca"

DELETE

"en el área de"

"existe una población hispana"

Link to the source

"música latina"

Rephrase this.

Above eahc video you should quote some lyrics, just the meaningful sentence in your opinion. Use a bigger font for it, and use quotation marks, so we can know that is in the song, and we can discover the main message before listening it.

"Se usaba"

"procedente de"

"su música se inspiró en la habanera cubana"

Confusing. What do you mean?

Link directo a la fuente.

"probablemente"