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Rachel Seo

Stop Using Chimps as Guinea Pigs - NYTimes.com - 0 views

  • Ending chimpanzee research and retiring the animals to sanctuaries would save taxpayers about $30 million a year.
    • Bobby Choi
       
      A good balance between logos and pathos in the writing.
  • But in the years since, our understanding of its effect on primates, as well as alternatives to it, have made great strides, to the point where I no longer believe such experiments make sense — scientifically, financially or ethically.
    • Bobby Choi
       
      Thesis Statement
  • BEFORE I was elected to Congress, I was a physiologist at the Navy’s School of Aviation Medicine.
    • Bobby Choi
       
      Exordium, Massive Ethos
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  • At the time, I believed such research was worth the pain inflicted on the animals.
    • Bobby Choi
       
      Minor Confutatio
  • Baker was the first primate to survive a trip into space and back; Able, her counterpart on the flight, died from an allergic reaction to an anesthetic during a procedure shortly after the landing.
    • Rachel Seo
       
      Narratio
  • If you’ve seen video of a knockdown, you know it is clearly frightening and stressful.
    • Rachel Seo
       
      Pathos
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anonymous

Why Atheists And Other Non-Christians Should Support The Ground Zero Cross | FoxNews.com - 0 views

  • A rabbi supporting the Ground Zero Cross? 
    • anonymous
       
      Rhetorical Question
    • Jay Jeong
       
      exordium
  • A rabbi supporting the Ground Zero Cross? 
    • Eunice C
       
      rhetorical questoin
  • The fused steel cross at the site of the 9/11 attacks in New York City was a crucial part of thousands of people’s experience in the weeks and months following the horror of that bright September morning.
    • Eunice C
       
      narratio
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  • The fused steel cross at the site of the 9/11 attacks in New York City was a crucial part of thousands of people’s experience in the weeks and months following the horror of that bright September morning
    • anonymous
       
      Narratio 
  • Yes, and proud to do so because in doing so I, and all others who do so, support freedom of expression, inclusiveness and the importance of remembering the events of 9/11 and its aftermath, as fully and as accurately as possible.
    • Eunice C
       
      propositio
  • Yes, and proud to do so because in doing so I, and all others who do so, support freedom of expression, inclusiveness and the importance of remembering the events of 9/11 and its aftermath, as fully and as accurately as possible
  • Gandhi challenged his followers to be the change which they desired to see in the world.   
    • Eunice C
       
      digressio
  • I hope that those
    • anonymous
       
      Parallelism
  • Atheist groups, who are fighting the hardest to exclude the cross, are actually, if unwittingly, fighting for the opposite of the religious and intellectual freedom for which they claim to stand.  By fighting against the inclusion of the cross, they turn the important and ongoing fight for their own legitimacy and inclusion into a fight for precisely the kind of exclusion and lack of recognition to which they themselves are regularly subjected in many situations. 
    • Eunice C
       
      confutatio
  • Rabbi Brad Hirschfield
Rachel Lee

Marriage -- It Really Is A Beautiful Thing | FoxNews.com - 0 views

  • pretty important. That howev
    • Bobby Choi
       
      Conversational Tone
  • Far from the miserable, broke, sexless life that it’s made out to be, the life of today’s married man is more fulfilling than any lonely, self-pleasing, single guy could hope for.
  • This myth, is not even in the vicinity of being true. The fact is that not only is divorce much lower than commonly stated, but the divorce rate is consistently declining because people of all ages inherently understand it’s value.
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  • The truth is that married people live longer, happier, wealthier and more fulfilling lives by nearly every measurable barometer.
  • Sorry Alfie, looks like Ward Cleaver has you beat.
  • Yes folks, there is one place where well over half of all marriages end in failure, one place where marriage results in dishonesty, stress, misery and a markedly decreased libido. That place is Hollywood. The next time a miserable, married couple shows on the silver screen or your plasma, try remembering that.
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Peroratio: tells the readers to do such action
  • Also – and many of you will really hate to hear this – if both partners are actively practicing a religious faith, their divorce rate is even lower.
  • Yes folks,
    • Albert Park
       
      Colloquial tone!
    • Bobby Choi
       
      Exordium
    • Christina Suh
       
      Quality: Conversational tone
    • Christina Suh
       
      The tone of this article is very different from that of other articles in that other articles usually engage in a formal tone. 
  • As my brother’s luminescent face transitioned to a cousin Eddie-like expression of anticipation, every single one of us in attendance understood that we were witnessing something special, something meaningful. 
  • (albeit hairy)
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Colloquial tone: make article more personal
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Ethos: establish credibility of how he came to talk about marriage
  • Sure, we’ve all seen the sitcoms and the movies
  • who would really care
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Rhetorical Question
  • Again, this is a myth perpetuated
  • I know what you’re thinking
  • In my opinion, that’s a beautiful thing.
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Propositio: main argument (marriage is a beautiful thing)
  • open the floodgates
    • Rachel Lee
       
      Metaphor: floodgate
  • with no strings attached
    • Rachel Lee
       
      allusion
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    This article has some risque elements. If you're offended by this sort of thing, don't read it. I'm including it as an example of different tone / diction.
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    This article has some risque elements. If you're offended by this sort of thing, don't read it. I'm including it as an example of different tone / diction.
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    This article has some risque elements. If you're offended by this sort of thing, don't read it. I'm including it as an example of different tone / diction.
sally yu

Stop Using Chimps as Guinea Pigs - NYTimes.com - 0 views

  • BEFORE I was elected to Congress, I was a physiologist at the Navy’s School of Aviation Medicine.
    • Peter Park
       
      Ethos
    • Peter Park
       
      Exordium
    • sally yu
       
      exordium
  • But in the years since, our understanding of its effect on primates, as well as alternatives to it, have made great strides, to the point where I no longer believe such experiments make sense — scientifically, financially or ethically.
    • Peter Park
       
      Propositio
    • Erin Kim
       
      General Argument : The author strongly believes that they should no longer use chimps as guinea pigs because they do not benefit scientifically, financially, and ethically.
    • Peter Park
       
      scientifically, financially or ethically: partitio
    • sally yu
       
      propositio
    • sally yu
       
      partitio
  • Americans can no longer justify confining these magnificent and innocent animals to traumatic invasive research and life imprisonment.
    • Peter Park
       
      Peroratio
    • Erin Kim
       
      general conclduing argument
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  • Baker was the first primate to survive a trip into space and back; Able, her counterpart on the flight, died from an allergic reaction to an anesthetic during a procedure shortly after the landing.
    • Kyu Park
       
      Logos, shows how we rely on chimps as experimental animals because they are 'able'
    • sally yu
       
      narratio
  • The evidence
  • The evidence
    • Peter Park
       
      Confirmatio
  • Meanwhile, nine countries, as well as the European Union, already forbid or restrict invasive research on great apes
    • Kyu Park
       
      Logos; others aren't doing it anymore. We shouldn't either. Uses conformity.
  • There is no question that chimpanzees experience pain, stress and social isolation in ways strikingly similar to the way humans do
    • Erin Kim
       
      Argument : the chimps feel the pain in the same way that the humans do
  • Stories
  • ethical, financial and scientific costs
  • For one thing, many new techniques are cheaper, faster and more effective, including computer modeling and the testing of very small doses on human volunteers.
    • Erin Kim
       
      The technology is economically more efficient to utilize rather than the real-life animals.
    • sally yu
       
      confirmatio
  • magnificent and innocent animals to traumatic invasive research and life imprisonment.
  • I invented a series of respiratory support devices, which we tested on primates, including Baker, a squirrel monkey.
    • sally yu
       
      exordium
  • drop in primate research. Many federally owned chimpanzees were bred to support AIDS research, but later proved inferior to more modern technologies. As a result, most of the 500 federally owned chimpanzees are idling in warehouses. Ending chimpanzee research and retiring the animals to sanctuaries would save taxpayers about $30 million a year.
David Kim

Rick Perry's Unanswered Prayers - NYTimes.com - 0 views

  • To Jews, Muslims, non-believers and even many Christians, the Biblical bully that is Rick Perry  must sound downright menacing, particularly when he gets into religious absolutism.
    • Diana Lee
       
      Refutation
  • To Jews, Muslims, non-believers and even many Christians, the Biblical bully that is Rick Perry  must sound downright menacing, particularly when he gets into religious absolutism. “As a nation, we must call upon Jesus to guide us through unprecedented struggles,” he said last week.
    • Christine Choi
       
      Refutation-Rick Perry is not respecting other religions
  • Is this Rick Perry’s fault, a slap to a man who doesn’t believe that humans can alter the earth’s climate —  God messin’ with Texas?
    • Diana Lee
       
      Rhetorical Question
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  • But Perry’s tendency to use prayer as public policy demonstrates, in the midst of a truly painful, wide-ranging and potentially catastrophic crisis in the nation’s second most-populous state, how he would govern if he became president.
    • Diana Lee
       
      General Argument
  • But Perry’s tendency to use prayer as public policy demonstrates, in the midst of a truly painful, wide-ranging and potentially catastrophic crisis in the nation’s second most-populous state, how he would govern if he became president.
  • But Texas is special.  By many measures, it is the nation’s most polluted state.  Dirty air and water do not seem to bother Perry.  He is, however,  extremely perturbed by the Environmental Protection Agency’s enforcement of laws designed to clean the world around him.  In a recent interview,  he wished for the president to pray away the E.P.A.
    • Diana Lee
       
      Usage of sarcasm.
  • But Texas is special.  By many measures, it is the nation’s most polluted state.  Dirty air and water do not seem to bother Perry.  He is, however,  extremely perturbed by the Environmental Protection Agency’s enforcement of laws designed to clean the world around him.  In a recent interview,  he wished for the president to pray away the E.P.A.
    • Christine Choi
       
      Sarcasm
  • But Texas is special.
    • Yoonshin Lee
       
      Sarcastic
  • But Perry’s tendency to use prayer as public policy demonstrates, in the midst of a truly painful, wide-ranging and potentially catastrophic crisis in the nation’s second most-populous state, how he would govern if he became president.
    • Michelle Park
       
      General Argument
    • David Kim
       
      i agree
  • But Texas is special.  By many measures, it is the nation’s most polluted state.  Dirty air and water do not seem to bother Perry.  He is, however,  extremely perturbed by the Environmental Protection Agency’s enforcement of laws designed to clean the world around him.  In a recent interview,  he wished for the president to pray away the E.P.A.
    • Michelle Park
       
      Sarcasm/One Quality
  • To Jews, Muslims, non-believers and even many Christians, the Biblical bully that is Rick Perry  must sound downright menacing, particularly when he gets into religious absolutism. “As a nation, we must call upon Jesus to guide us through unprecedented struggles,” he said last week.
    • Michelle Park
       
      Refutatio
  • God messin’ with Texas?
    • Michelle Park
       
      Rhetorical Questions
  • Perry revels in a muscular brand of ignorance (Rush Limbaugh is a personal hero), one that extends to the ever-fascinating history of the Lone Star State.  Twice in the last two years he’s broached the subject of Texas seceding from the union.
    • Diana Lee
       
      Author addresses Perry's illogical arguments
  • Perry is supposed to be the savior. When he joins the campaign in the next few days, expect him to show off his boots; they are emblazoned with the slogan dating to the 1835 Texas Revolution: “Come and Take It.”  He once explained the logo this way:  “Come and take it — that’s what it’s all about.” This is not a man one would expect to show humility in prayer.
  • Perry is supposed to be the savior. When he joins the campaign in the next few days, expect him to show off his boots; they are emblazoned with the slogan dating to the 1835 Texas Revolution: “Come and Take It.”  He once explained the logo this way:  “Come and take it — that’s what it’s all about.” This is not a man one would expect to show humility in prayer.
  • Barack Obama
    • Christine Choi
       
      Allusion to Obama... Perry doesn't have a chance to win
  • Lakes have disappeared. Creeks are phantoms, the caked bottoms littered with rotting, dead fish.  Farmers cannot coax a kernel of grain from ground that looks like the skin of an aging elephant.
    • Diana Lee
       
      Imagery
    • Diana Lee
       
      Depict the severe situation first to introduce the problems and go on to address the issue
  • Lakes have disappeared. Creeks are phantoms, the caked bottoms littered with rotting, dead fish.  Farmers cannot coax a kernel of grain from ground that looks like the skin of an aging elephant.
    • Christine Choi
       
      Imagery
  • Lakes have disappeared. Creeks are phantoms, the caked bottoms littered with rotting, dead fish.  Farmers cannot coax a kernel of grain from ground that looks like the skin of an aging elephant.
    • Michelle Park
       
      Imagery
  • Rush Limbaugh is a personal hero), one that extends to the ever-fascinating histor
  • Allah or a Hindu God for Jesus and see how that polls.
  • After the worst week of his presidency (and the weakest Oval Office speech since Gerald Ford unveiled buttons to whip inflation), the best thing Barack Obama has going for him is this Republican field.  He still beats all of them in most polling match-ups.
    • Diana Lee
       
      Perry doesn't stand a chance in the Oval Office
  • A few months ago
    • Christine Choi
       
      Structure: the writer addresses Rick Perry's most current mistakes and then goes on to explain why he can't be a good president
  • a man who hopes to be the next president took pen in hand and went to work:
    • Diana Lee
       
      Exordium
  • A few months ago, with Texas aflame from more than 8,000 wildfires brought on by extreme drought, a man who hopes to be the next president took pen in hand and went to work:
  • a man who hopes to be the next president took pen in hand and went to work:
  • Substitute Allah or a Hindu God for Jesus and see how that polls.
    • David Kim
       
      sarcasm
  • God may not always be reliable, but in Perry’s home county, the federal government certainly is.
Jane Song

Stop Using Chimps as Guinea Pigs - NYTimes.com - 0 views

    • Jane Song
       
      Strong Ethos. Rather than merely calling for arms, he actually introduces the bipartisan legislation himself. 
    • Jane Song
       
      Establishes ethos by stating his credentials: being elected to Congress, physiologist at the Navy's school of aviation medicine. 
  • traumatized by his living conditions.
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  • But in the years since, our understandin
  • where I no longer believe such experiments make sense
    • Jane Song
       
      Firm and resolute tone. 
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