I am sorry but I must disagree. If the problem is that American students hate to write and write poorly, the solution is not to remove it from our education system. In fact, the opposite is true.
Which are the most common mistakes you’d like to warn your readers for? And help them avoid? Sprinkle these mistakes — with advice on how to avoid them — over your tutorial, to keep readers captivated.
Your word choice has to be sharper and harder-hitting than the words you use when you talk because in writing you can’t scream, sing, or use wild gestures. Your words have to capture attention, express emotion, and get your message across.
To make your writing voice stronger and more dynamic:
Choose sensory words like creepy, bland, or dazzling
Pick emotional words like mesmerizing, mind-numbing, and captivating
Religiously tighten your text; and tighten it more
There’s one more thing you shouldn’t forget: A good teacher or mentor inspires her students to implement her ideas.
Consider what might stop your reader from following your advice … and take away that final obstacle.
When you encourage your readers to overcome their doubts and take action, they’ll hang on to your lips to hear each word.
Metaphors help readers visualize an abstract concept by relating it to something concrete. They help people understand a new idea by relating it to something they know already.
Problems are like speed bumps — they slow your reader down. They start paying attention again, because everyone is keen to avoid glitches, hassle, and mistakes.