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Claire Lin

Some Bones to Pick: Hello World! - 1 views

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shared by Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13 - No Cached
  • Then we had to get out of the van
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      maybe "but moment i jumped out the van"?
  • un-belize-able
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      BAHAHA LOVE IT
  • without  much
  • ...8 more annotations...
  • veryone
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      "without much" has extra space
  • f road--
  • But the view, oh it was wonderful! The jungle canopy opened to reveal mounds upon mounds of stone rubble and in other areas, reconstructed ball courts and walls. Thinking back now it still takes my breath away. It was more than just the awe-inspiring monuments that surrounded us on all sides; it was about being a part of history. We were a part of uncovering and paving a path for others to learn from what we had documented on our trip (and the valuable knowledge we gained from archaeologists like Keith Prufer). Now THIS was archaeology.
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      Nice! :) The descriptions and your reactions to the environment really added up to the last sentence of the paragraph
  • disappointing
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      ; or --
  • booby-traps)
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      :)
  • artifacts
  • artifacts
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      ,
  • Last semester
    • Claire Lin
      Claire Lin on 04 Apr 13
       
      this paragraph seems a little out of place (and with less voice) compared to the rest of the post. Was this a required part of our post? I can't remember. But it's interesting information that could be linked better with the rest of the post. I think the concluding sentence is great! but it kind of gets overlooked because of this paragraph. somehow try to link it better and it sound more fun. Or elaborate more on the concluding paragraph, maybe?
Mark Marino

Illuminati Defector Details Pervasive Conspiracy - 7 views

rense.com/...illuminatidefector.htm

illuminati

shared by Mark Marino on 07 Feb 13 - No Cached
  • If you detect the devil's hand in
    • Mark Marino
      Mark Marino on 07 Feb 13
       
      Wow, this is a great first line.
  • A woman who was raised in the Illuminati cult describes a powerful secret organization
  • ary takeover. Her revela
    • Mark Marino
      Mark Marino on 07 Feb 13
       
      Woh
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