Where is your post linking to three blogs you've discovered? (I know you're away, but that's the assignment. Find 3 blogs - blogs, not websites, written by normal people, not companies - and write short paragraphs explaining why you like them. Link to them so they'll find your blog through Technorati.)
You have such potential as a writer. The intelligence and soul are there, and the pretty unteachable writer's instinct.
Sometimes I wish you'd lay off the SAT words, though. They make me feel like you're trying to sound smart, when really you don't need them to show that. It's clear you're smart without them. So they really just hurt your voice a bit.
I enjoyed many of your choices to write about, and the way you wrote and presented.
Really cool picture. Really cool layout (I like how you lined it up perfectly). I love how you change font colors all the time. But out of curiosity, why is your category named "Lala"? Is it just the random category?
I think you should change the title. haha It's creative, but I don't think you want others to get a certain impression of you. And I think the size of the title can be a little bigger? After all, it is the title.
Content 5: Organization- Maybe you should add a sidebar with the categories of your posts and categorize your posts too so the reader can find what he/she wants right away.
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